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[Shindy]

And as she braced for the attack, she thought back to the beginning of the fight and how she got herself into this mess in the first place. Ashley had noticed the newcomer several days earlier, the latina had ridden in on the back of her boyfriend's Harley, and when she had walked into the bar nearly every guy's jaw dropped. Maria was a looker alright, big tits, dark exotic skin, lots of makeup. A tight tube top and skin tight leather pants over heels had topped it off. The unofficial "queen" of the joint and certainly the toughest chick around after having won 19 barfights in the past year or so, Ashley didn't like losing the focus of attention. As such, she got up, and "accidentally" bumped into Maria, spilling a little drink on her. Maria was apparently staying in town for a few days Ashley later found out as the skank continued to show up on a nightly basis.

Well on the third night, Maria walked in wearing nothing essentially except for a pair of lycra pants to midcalf and a halter top that left nothing to the imagination. The top was backless, so Ashley was sure that Maria wasn't wearing a bra to cover her big tits and so Ashley made a movie and got her ring "caught" on the top as she passed by and the top flew down, unalbe to control the bountiful mounds straining at it. Maria covered for a moment and then shoved Ashley. The bar saw and roared. The bouncer grabbed Maria and said, take it to the "ring" (which was really a room in the back with huge holes cut in the walls to allow customers to look in.) And so the fight began, and as usually Ashley came out ahead in the beginning. This time though, Maria came back at her and pummeled her relentlessly, which brought us up to date...

coming soon.

[MikeJV]

Nice, please continue.

MikeJV

[rpkclubs7]

This sounds like an excellent story. Please keep going.

Oh, and BTW, I'm one of those "lurkers." I've been reading the stories on this board for a while, and I'm always impressed. I would like to take a second now to thank MikeJV, Catwacher, Shindy, C, TedMark, Jessika and others I know I'm forgetting right now. The stories here are always excellent. I've had a go at writing such stories once or twice, but they never came off quite right. You guys have a real knack.

RPK